tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post5036212248835217375..comments2023-10-06T09:21:06.764-05:00Comments on BATTLING MY INNER CRITIC: HE KNOWS TOO MUCHBargain Decorating with Lauriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13582640485560903639noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-73643880220483747212011-08-28T11:01:15.653-05:002011-08-28T11:01:15.653-05:00Oh Laurie, this was beautifully poignant and so mo...Oh Laurie, this was beautifully poignant and so moving.<br /><br />Such a different perspective to write about 911 from. This made my eyes tear up. What a horrible time that was.<br /><br />Thank you for linking.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-80937241539669681382011-08-23T00:31:02.813-05:002011-08-23T00:31:02.813-05:00Very nicely written. Well done.Very nicely written. Well done.D. Jean Quarleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01327174739435123349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-35819672476750152142011-08-21T10:35:35.539-05:002011-08-21T10:35:35.539-05:00Such a sad and sobering tale of the emotional toll...Such a sad and sobering tale of the emotional toll taken from one family in the aftermath of 9/11. Great take on the prompt! Well done!Tgoettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-41784515564029068722011-08-21T05:20:54.518-05:002011-08-21T05:20:54.518-05:00Great post! Well-crafted writing.
I am so glad tha...Great post! Well-crafted writing.<br />I am so glad that this is fiction. <br />I usually add a 'P.S.' when I write something that could be interpreted as factual. I made the same mistake on the anniversary of 9/11. I usually also write in the third person using the name of a fictional character, such as my alter ego 'Sanna'. <br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http:/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-70649590524095432592011-08-21T01:15:54.907-05:002011-08-21T01:15:54.907-05:00what a heartbreaking story ... this was so dad, ye...what a heartbreaking story ... this was so dad, yet a bit sweet as well. Well done!Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270665398498790951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-84559391674390936102011-08-21T01:07:44.877-05:002011-08-21T01:07:44.877-05:00Obviously well done, since so many thought it was ...Obviously well done, since so many thought it was true.<br />Nice job and so believable.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-42576227392564596892011-08-20T20:10:17.706-05:002011-08-20T20:10:17.706-05:00Beautiful. I got chills reading this.Beautiful. I got chills reading this.Dazee Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323163539682131873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-71405970394631834112011-08-20T19:10:58.120-05:002011-08-20T19:10:58.120-05:00Believable fiction means excellent writing. Nicely...Believable fiction means excellent writing. Nicely done. This was somber and sweet.<br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-5833111080230656332011-08-20T18:33:33.088-05:002011-08-20T18:33:33.088-05:00I'm sure this conversation has taken place man...I'm sure this conversation has taken place many times between parent and child since 9/11. Excellent take on the prompt.Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-50428463568516122262011-08-20T14:40:11.180-05:002011-08-20T14:40:11.180-05:00THere may well be someone who this refers to. It i...THere may well be someone who this refers to. It is a great piece of writing that ends with hope.jfb57https://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-78176669803233183142011-08-20T14:25:41.851-05:002011-08-20T14:25:41.851-05:00great use of the prompt It broght tears to my eyes...great use of the prompt It broght tears to my eyesTo the Toy Box and Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09664470779483733379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-65981775008078630232011-08-20T11:59:12.542-05:002011-08-20T11:59:12.542-05:00That was a great post, so real, great job.That was a great post, so real, great job.Madgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05253148312607083413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-54267073005820526202011-08-20T10:48:22.261-05:002011-08-20T10:48:22.261-05:00I think you need to add a P.S. maybe because I too...I think you need to add a P.S. maybe because I too thought it was a real event, so, I do think you maybe should add a note that it is fiction.<br />Sad story, good use of the centus prompt.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-5479998090108720602011-08-20T10:31:21.182-05:002011-08-20T10:31:21.182-05:00CJ, I didn't intend to mislead. This piece is...CJ, I didn't intend to mislead. This piece is fictional. I'm sorry if I implied otherwise. laurieBargain Decorating with Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13582640485560903639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-81416766200812582442011-08-20T10:15:58.685-05:002011-08-20T10:15:58.685-05:00Laurie,
I send to you and your young soon my dee...Laurie,<br /><br />I send to you and your young soon my deepest sympathies. Your piece is achingly touching and brought tears to my eyes. Good writing evokes emotional responses from the reader, and this is really good writing!<br /><br />Namaste...........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-32454831361325695932011-08-20T10:08:53.464-05:002011-08-20T10:08:53.464-05:00Excellent !
There are so many stories and scenes ...Excellent !<br /><br />There are so many stories and scenes like this one playing out since 9/11...heart wrenching !Nonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03227580166409342214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088565620419485017.post-29225860579441795552011-08-20T10:03:42.007-05:002011-08-20T10:03:42.007-05:00Such a haunting story, may God bless you all.Such a haunting story, may God bless you all.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.com