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Saturday, July 07, 2012

HE SAID, SHE SAID

For Saturday Centus, Jenny has given us the prompt, “he said, she said” plus 100 words.  Jenny is being very generous this week.  She has also given us permission to split the prompt!  I’ve never known Jenny to do that.  Thanks Jenny!  My contribution is yet another silly little ditty.  I’m afraid I’m kind of “in” to silly little ditties lately.  I think I broke the rules.  Jenny specifically said we should have only 104 words.  Each time I used the words from the prompt, I did not count them in my total, so I have ended up with more than 104 words.  Sorry, Jenny and others who read this.

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SUBTLE BREAKUP

She said they were a couple;

He said they were only friends.

She said, if we’re not a couple,

If we’re truly only friends,

About this I won’t be subtle,

Our romping in bed now ends.

~~~

He said, no, we are a couple

You are more than a friend.

She said, I have no rebuttal,

I’m convinced you’re just a friend.

My friend, I’m glad we’re not a couple,

This is an argument we both win.

~~~

He said, I think I didn’t win

this argument we’ve been in.

You must not have wanted

us to be a couple.

You just dumped me,

but you were oh so subtle!

I’m so glad you visited my blog today.  Be sure to check out other Saturday Centus contributions at Jenny Matlock Off On My Tangent.  laurie

 

9 comments:

Dreaming said...

*chuckle* this was great fun!

Dreaming said...

*chuckle* this was great fun!

Sue said...

Cute, Laurie!

=)

Gail said...

Cute and funny!

Karen S. said...

This is so true.....really truthful kind of he said, she said dialogue!

anitamombanita said...

Well done. I think this happens too often in real life. Sad, but cute the way you did it!

Judie said...

Women are WAY smarter than men! Great post, Laurie!!!

Carrie said...

Very entertaining :)

Jenny said...

Uh oh. If this is cheating I am totally guilty of counting like this, too!

I often use the prompt repetitively and only count them once!

This was a fun read!

Love your creative cuteness here!

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